Well, as some of you might know, I’ve been working on getting a (good) printed version of Chapter 1 to take with me to cons. The original printed version was rushed, and it showed. As such, I decided to wait until I had the time to really work on the first chapter. Over the past month or so, I’ve been fixing up the first 5 or so pages. I completely re-drew two of them, since I felt even the line art looked awful, but for the others, I’ve more or less left the line art alone besides a few additions. I also added color to the first few pages, although for the most part, the first chapter will be black and white.
I’ve been wondering whether or not to replace the pages uploaded in the archives with these new ones, or to leave up the old versions and just make the new ones available in the printed version. I would appreciate your input in this area. Would you like the old to be replaced as I go along, or should I just leave it alone?
For those of you who wish to view the new pages, just head on over to the forum. You don’t need to join to view the pages; just to leave comments on them.


