I’m finally taking the time to update the first chapter. Most of the original art will remain, but I’ve done quite a bit of tweaks to both the dialog and some minor details. I’ve also gone ahead and added a page or two here and there in order to help flesh out everything. With any luck, this means the first chapter will flow better, and will also translate into paper comic form a little easier.
Originally, this page contained the same idea: show the house Maqqy lives in, with her mother going about her morning routine. However, at that time, I had decided to free-hand draw the house, and it was a disaster. As such, I never uploaded it. This time, I used a wonderful invention called the ‘ruler’ and made it all pretty again.